Sunday, March 6, 2016

A Savage Waiting

   
  
       "Torches light up the confusion. Everyone yells and curses and slaughters. The madness and despair of many hours unloads itself in this outburst. Faces are distorted, arms strike out, and the beasts scream; we just stop in time to avoid attacking each other."(pg.108) And so goes the obvious tension unbridled upon rats fleeing a dugout. This action occurs shortly before the French attack.
        This same maddening energy is released by the German company on their attackers. Like above, they rush to the enemy amidst shell smoke and gas grenades. Earlier they had removed any mans' saw-edged bayonets, remarking about men found "whose noses were cut off and their eyes poked out with their own sawbayonets."(103) Paul, the narrator of the tale, tells of the "the smooth distorted faces, the helmets"(112) identifying the men as French. He goes on to mention their losses at the wire. Kropp and Haie, meanwhile, had tossed many grenades into the enemy's midst. Like in the image above, men rush forward into the brawl. While both pictures and books can have no sound, the way the action is described and captured noise is apparent in both situations. Paul describes it as "a circus" that surrounds him. The men in both situations are under extreme stress. While there was no other choice in WWI, the black-and-white photo tells a better story than a normal color. The black tells the story of the dark, depressing time that was WWI. The men stop fighting and just defend themselves, like "wild beasts"(113)

2 comments:

  1. Great use of quotes as evidence. You do a lot of explaining the actions in the book. You're doing a really good job at that, but maybe dig a little deeper to get at the meaning behind those actions. Why they've become "wild beasts"? Are they acting like beasts because of the action, you can go on to explain that. What could this picture represent, other than action? Good job :)

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  2. A unique comparison is made here due to the passage you chose to compare with. When I read it the first time I was confused at the choice but I thought about it and understood when you mentioned the rats after the quote. The only comparison that you make, however is in the first line of the second paragraph with "The same..." While other similarities are mentioned -such as sound- they could be more evident with the words we listed last class.

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